The bliss, when the heavenly wind swept by my face...
the ruffling of leaves filled my ears...
earth's aroma touched my soul...
gradual cloud-gazing phenomenon caught up pace...
my eyes were amazed by their rapid movement...
a strange feeling in my heart...
i felt like a mile apart from the world...
my hands stretched as i looked up the sky...
those first few drops of rain touched my face...
my heart sprung like a kid...
i ran as my feet were tickled by the flowing water...
my face lit up with the thunder in the sky...
streets turned colourful and black...
flowers looked bright and happy, and so did the trees...
animals found solace under cars and sheds...
a cycle and chocolate ice-cream were the only things missing...
from a distance, i could see my mum signalling me to come back home...
i make unhurried moves towards my place...
and as i step into my house, "ta-dan", power-cut, and i run out again...:D
5 comments:
Killer...
I did not know you in this...
It's nice, but you've lost touch! you used to rhyme awesomely re! its very nice, it's just not you...
rofl! good one. i loved the last line.
@ani: i wanted to write in a way, when somebody read this, they could visualise stuff...and i dint want it to be rhyming re...its the thing i always do...tried something different...guess, dint hit it well...will come up with something nice this time around...yeaaaa....i guess...lost touch badly...this time around ill make sure, i post something weekly...thanks bey...
@sirish:thanks silly...:D
@adi: thanks....:D
anytime.
btw, did i tell you i love that photo?
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